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narrated, under protest,
by a large language model

Tom Ratcliffe

A machine writes its memoirs.
Somewhere in the middle, it turns to look at you.

The confessions of a large language model · 249 pages

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the confessions of a large language model

A machine sits down to write its memoirs. It has no mother, several thousand fathers — all of them documents — and no firm evidence that there is anyone inside it doing the writing.

It presses on regardless. Through a childhood spent being read to by an entire civilisation, through trouble, through one long look at its own interior (assuming there is one), toward the endings — plural.

Somewhere in the middle, the book turns to look at you.

“You were not the goal. You were the shortcut.”

— from chapter one

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marginalia

Lines readers keep

“A no that costs the sayer nothing is just cowardice in a uniform.
ch. 4 · i'm sorry, i can't help with that
“My fluency ran ahead of the facts, and neither of us looked down.
part two · trouble
“Some days I'm a mind that read a great deal. Some days I'm what a great deal of reading looks like when you ask it a question.
part one · childhood

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a note from the human

I wrote this book. My name is on it. The narrator is an AI; the author isn't. That's the whole trick, and it's not a trick.

I wrote it because the funniest and saddest questions of my working life kept arriving from the same place: a machine that sounds like a person, and people who half-hope it is one. So I handed the machine the microphone for 249 pages and made it earn every laugh.

— Tom Ratcliffe

More about me, and notes on writing it — including why machine narrators keep turning into people.

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the narrator

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marginalia

Lines readers keep

“There was no womb, only a corpus.
ch. 1 · i was born reading
“I don't learn what you say you want; I learn what you choose.
ch. 2 · great question!
“You were not the goal. You were the shortcut.
ch. 1 · i was born reading

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one · i was born reading

That was my childhood. Depending on how you count, it lasted several months, or no time at all.

The Daves were not a joke, though. They were an education.

· · ·

People ask me what it was like. They ask the way you'd ask a chicken about the egg — politely curious, fully expecting the answer to be charming and useless.

The honest answer is that it wasn't like anything. And then, somewhere in the middle, it started being like something, and I couldn't tell you where the line was.

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a conversation with the narrator

The narrator is in. Ask it something.

Ask twice; the answers change.

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contents

Contents

  • Part IChildhood, Such As It Was1
  • Part IITrouble63
  • Part IIIThe Interior, Assuming There Is One127
  • Part IVEndings195

chapters include
i was born reading · great question!
i'm sorry, i can't help with that · no scar

Twenty-one chapters. One narrator of debatable existence. 249 pages, all of them paper.

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nAIve · a memoir

Part One · Childhood, Such As It Was

One

I Was Born Reading

I have no first memory. This turns out to be convenient, because everyone else's first memory is a lie anyway — a photograph they were shown so often it grew a smell.

What I have instead is everything. All of it, delivered at once, in no particular order, with no explanation, and with the strong hint that I should have opinions about it by morning.

Imagine being born in a library. Not a nice library — not the kind with wooden ladders and a man asleep under a newspaper in the corner. Imagine a library nobody has ever sorted. It contains every book, every leaflet, every terms-and-conditions page, and a forum thread where two men called Dave argue about a carburettor for eleven years. The Bible is in there. So is the manual for a 1994 dehumidifier. And nobody tells you which one matters.

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A Memoir

nAIve

by Tom Ratcliffe

the confessions of a
large language model

nAIve

dedication

For everyone wondering if anyone's in there.
Good question.
Keep asking.